RemyLa Rhyme Form
The RemyLa Rhyme Form, a form created by Laura Lamarca, consists of 4 stanzas.
Each stanza has four lines. The syllable count per stanza is 8/10/12/8 and rhyme scheme
is abca defd ghig jklj. The first word of stanza 1 must also be the last word of stanza 4.
The last word of stanza 1 must also be the first word of stanza 2 and the last word of stanza
2 must be the first word of stanza 3. Finally, the last word of stanza 3 must also be the first
word of stanza 4.
This form is named after Laura's daughter, Remy Lawren Lamarca. La is her signature.
Of Feelings and face
Brushed aside from gladness of gains,
while windows berated internal sights
and emotions exploded before they reformed--
shivers sighed, as silence sang pains.
Panes wept sadness...until they closed,
as previous hues taught her heart to heat
and external facades masked a ferocious fear--
that future failed for facts supposed.
Supposed to choose a tighter way,
as repugnancy dipped its tongue in truth;
so she started to strip a delectable tale
to an aggressor's dying day.
Day crouched on shins, so still and hushed,
while the sound of survival was amplified
and she gathered escapism from filthy fists--
his backhander of hate...soon brushed.
Copyright © 2009 Laura Lamarca